Your grad school application essay is also an opportunity to explain anything in your academic record that might raise an eyebrow among the admission committee, like a semester of poor grades, time off in your schooling, or a less-than-perfect GRE score.
For example, if you worked part or full time to help fund your undergrad education, that lends some important context to your experience and achievements; maybe your undergrad GPA isn’t quite as high as it might’ve been otherwise, but graduate admission counselors will likely appreciate your hard work and dedication.
Undergrad professors or mentors are great for this, but you can ask trusted friends too.
And don’t forget about any career, writing, and/or tutoring centers at your undergraduate institution; they may be able to review your essay and application, and their services are often available long after you graduate.
And you can talk about your academic achievements, internships, published work, and even study abroad experiences.
They all make great graduate personal statement fodder. Before stuffing your application essay with every accomplishment and experience from your time as an undergrad, make sure you’re only highlighting those that pertain to your intended graduate studies and future goals.
You could talk about your favorite book character, a beloved hobby, or a cause near to your heart.
Now you’re ready to apply to grad schools, with another application essay (or 10) to write.
You’ll have four (or more) years of collegiate writing under your belt, and your grad school statement needs to reflect that.
Use active language, smooth transitions, an attention-grabbing opening, and a strong conclusion.